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高考英语写作练习(情景作文)课件(27张)_图文

写作练习
——情景作文

Objectives:
At the end of the class, students will be

able to

Write a complete composition to describe a process of an activity, making use of correct past tense , different sentence patterns .

假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华,上学期你们班在密云学 农基地开展了为期一周的学农活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序, 写一篇英文短文向某中学生英语报投稿,介绍你们本次学农活动的全 过程。

看图作文写作技巧
写作步骤: 1. 审题---- 体裁、时态、人称、结构 2. 列要点,细节,建立英文语库为写作做准备 3. 组织篇章---合适的连接词 4. 从句式,用词上进一步修改润色

文章结构:
?

Beginning: Body: Ending:

General introduction about activity: When, who, what, where, how

?

Main deeds+ necessary details Summary / feeling about the activity.

?

Beginning
? ? ? ? ?

When: Who: Where: What: How :

last term our class go to Miyun to work on the farm spend a whole week

Beginning

Last term, our class went to MiYun to work on the farm. We spent a whole week there.

Body: picture 1
要点:what did they do? tidy the room; tidied
clean the room; cleaned 细节:How did they do this? ….make the bed made ….sweep the floor swept ….wipe the window wiped

Picture 1
we began to tidy the room. some wiped the window, some swept the floor, and some made the bed.

Please discuss the pictures.
1.What did they do in each process?
2.How did they do ?

Picture 2

要点: what ,when and where did they do? in the fruit yard; begin to work; began 细节:How did they do this? …pick ….
picked

….carry…..
carried

….load the basket
loaded

Picture 3
要点:what did they do? harvest the corn harvested 细节:How did they do? …..cut down the corn
cut

…..pile
piled

…..put in ….
put

Picture 4
要点:what and where did they do ? get together got hold a party held in the open air 细节: …… sing songs sang ……dance danced ……clap clapped

Word bank
cleaned the room made the bed; swept the floor; window wiped the

came to the fruit yard and began to work;

picked apples from the tree; carried and loaded the baskets onto the trucks
harvested the corn; cut the corn down; piled them; put them into the baskets got together to hold a party;

Sang and danced happily; clapped heatedly

Ending:

Feeling about the activity

unforgettable experience

a meaning activity
valuable experience tired but happy never forget it

This was really an unforgettable experience for us all!

Last term, our class went to MiYun to work on the farm. We spent a whole week there. We began to tidy the room. Some wiped the window, some swept the floor, and some made the bed. we came to the fruit yard and began to work .Some of us picked apples from the trees, and some carried and loaded the baskets onto the trucks. we also helped with harvesting the corn. We cut down the corns, piled them and put them into the baskets. we got together to have a party in the open air. We sang and danced to celebrate the activity. Some even clapped heatedly . This was really an unforgettable experience for us all!

第一步修改:加连接词
表示时间关系先后的连词:when …, while…, as…, as soon as…,on (upon), afterwards, then, after, the moment, hardly…when, no sooner…than on the first day, then, on the last day in the morning, 表示递进关系的连词:Besides, furthermore, what’s more,

Last term we went to Miyun to work on the farm. We spent a whole week there. As soon as we arrived at the farm, we began to clean the room. Some wiped the window, some swept the floor, and some made the bed. After getting settled, we went to the fruit yard and began to work at once. Some of us picked apples and others loaded baskets of apples onto the trucks. Afterwards, we also helped with the corn harvest. We cut the corns off and piled them up and put them into the baskets. On the last day, we held a get-together party in the open air. We sang and danced happily to celebrate the activity. This was really an unforgettable experience for us all.

第二步修改:
简单句合并为 : 非限制性定语从句; 非谓语动词形式 使用词组、习语来代替一些单词,以增加文采。 适当的联想与发挥。

Last term, we went to Miyun to work on the farm. We spent a whole week there.

Last term, we went to Miyun to work on the farm, where we spent a whole week.

_______ to work at we went to the fruit yard and began once.

We went to the fruit yard and got down to work at once.

On the last day, we held a get-together party in the open air. We sang and danced happily to celebrate the activity. On the last day, we held a get-together party in the open air, singing and dancing happily to celebrate the activity.

This was really an unforgettable experience for us all!
What an unforgettable experience this activity was for us all!

Last term we went to Miyun to work on the farm, where we spent a whole week. As soon as we arrived at the farm, we began to clean the room. Some wiped the window, some swept the floor, and some made the bed. After getting settled, we went to the fruit yard and got down to work at once. Some of us picked apples and others loaded baskets of apples onto the trucks. Afterwards, we also helped with the corn harvest. We cut the corns down ,piled them up and put them into the baskets. On the last day, we got together to held a party in the open air, singing and dancing happily to celebrate the activity. What an unforgettable experience this activity was for us all!

Last term we went to Miyun to work on the farm,where we spent a whole week there. Upon our arrival, we were divided into groups of four and each group shared one room. All by ourselves, we wiped the windows, swept the floor and made the bed. After getting settled, we went to the fruit yard and got down to work at once. Some of us picked apples and others loaded baskets of apples onto the trucks. While we were there, we also helped with the corn harvest. We cut the corns off ,piled them up and put them into the baskets. Never in my life had I ever seen so many corns lying about in the field. I felt it was great fun. On the last day, we got together in the open air to have a party, singing and dancing happily .some even clapped heatedly. What an unforgettable experience this activity was for us all!

Homework:
假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华,为响应绿化祖国的号召, 你班四月 十二日去郊区植树。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序, 介绍植树活动的全过程, 给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“Green Action in Our Class” 为题的英文稿件。注意: 字数不少于60。 提示词: 郊区 suburbs

Thank you!


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